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So we can't go on forever
Not wanting to move on together
As you stand tall
Modest and all
I sit silenced quietly
Cold
Shaking violently

Why must all thoughts crawl back to you?
We were barely a something
I'm still left confused

So what is it that makes you worth my time
I try desperately to get you out of my mind

All these rhymes are simply to get my point across
And my point proclaims that without you I'm lost
©2007-2009 ~jennasemo
:iconjennasemo:

Author's Comments

Yeah, I'm still confused. long story.

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:iconfoxyjeans13:
you know you make some amazing poems
man you like the gut a lot hu
:iconlcshaver06:
Very nice poem!

I definitely like the format and flow.
:iconjennasemo:
lol yeah i guess you could say that.
i don't think my poems are that great, but that's just me huh? lol
:iconallofmyconfusion:
I can so relate....nice work.

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“I go to seek a great perhaps”
:iconallofmyconfusion:
np ^_^

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“I go to seek a great perhaps”
:iconjennasemo:
duede i'm like really durnk so yeah
let's aprty k?
i lsvoe u!
:iconallofmyconfusion:
Ha! point me in the way of the party.
But why are you on the computer when you're drunk?
kind of weird....

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“I go to seek a great perhaps”

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