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Forget it
I'm done
My happiness was over before it begun

Now strangle me
Kill me
Painful and slow
My heartache towards you is on the get-up-and-go

What held me back?
Saddened?
I'll never know
Your reasons for leaving were far worse than low

But whatever
Who cares
Friend or Foe
I'll be on my way
Further questions answer no
©2007-2009 ~jennasemo
:iconjennasemo:

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This is my saying goodbye to old love and moving on to the next.

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:iconmizzael:
Saying goodbye can be AMAZINGLY hard, but when you authentically move on its great, well at least on my case...for me it felt great not giving a crap about what she thought anymore, I was free from all responsibility and happy to be myself once more, although it kinda sucks in a way since now I dont have anything to write poetry about O.O. Nice poem, your rhymings always perfect.

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:iconjennasemo:
lol thankz! and yeah, i do feel better about not caring so much anymore. but this time, it's a different guy. but when he found this poem on my myspace and read it, he knew it was about him. so he asked me if i was givin up on him, and i told him that it was more like i was moving on rather than giving up. he seemed sad. so i'm confused now.
:iconfoxyjeans13:
i know what you mean but it's always my friends saying goodbye well they never really say goodbye they just stop friend but i still know what you mean man your poetry is the best i have read
:iconjennasemo:
I've had the little goodbye friend deal going before. It kind of sucks really. but thankz!
:iconfoxyjeans13:
oh i alway lose my friends.i know it always sucks.welcome
:iconfoxyjeans13:
oh i alway lose my friends.i know it always sucks.welcome
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:iconjennasemo:
hey, do u have myspace?
or aim?
:iconjennasemo:
u have myspace, aim, or facebook?
:iconfoxyjeans13:
nope but i'm going to make a myspace and aim soon

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